Crit Feedback

 

I presented my poster which is still not completely finished as I still need to add the text but I mostly received positive feedback and a few pointers to on how I could change it and improve it.

Things to consider-

• Stroke outline of the girl on poster is too thick and looks cartoony compared to the original. Try taking the stroke out and darkening the shading of the girl's skin on her arms and neck area.
• Place the LookBook logo somewhere, possibly the bottom right corner next to the girl where the white writing is in the original.

I don't think i'll put the logo in the bottom right corner because the girl is mover over to the right compared to the original anyway, so once i've put the text on it might balance out.

Since I have time too I think i'll probably put some more detail into the poster by slightly shading the trinkets being scattered. I'll also try putting the LookBook logo somewhere there among the trinkets like a badge or maybe inside the basket the girl is holding.